Sunday, November 11, 2007

If I were Jo

Dear father ,
I miss you very much! I was very worried that you fought with the enemies. I hope you will conquer them. Finally, I hpoe you can come back quickly.

Lots of love,
Jo

1 comment:

Wootang01 said...

Great job, Tommy! Your writing reveals subtle complexity in word choice and sentence structure. But check your spelling! Perhaps he WILL come back quickly too.